Sannel Larson

Thursday, February 21, 2013

Mercies in disguise - A Tanka Poem by Sannel






Delicate kisses



guided by the frigid breeze 



land upon my face. 



Endless blessings from the sky



flurried mercies in disguise.


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9 comments:

  1. Beautiful, Sannel! Simply beautiful! The vivid imagery makes me feel like I am there. The last line is especially wonderful and thought-provoking. This is another wonderful piece which I'm going to share with my friends. Keep up the good work, my friend!

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  2. Rick, I am truly honored by your compliments and cannot thank you enough for them. You always succeed to brighten my day with your visits.

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  3. I am glad I happened upon this treasure at the same time I discovered I could wish you the most happy and peaceful and fulfilling year to come, as you celebrate your birthday.

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  4. Maria, you are beautiful and tenderhearted.
    I thank God for blessing me with a friend like you in my life. Thank you.
    Hugs!

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  5. Nice! I feel like soft, gentle snowflakes are listlessly landing on my face while looking up. Awesome. It prompts a feeling to have yogurt with a 'pal.' this evening. Again, happy Birthday and God's blessings for the many years ahead.

    Mitch

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  6. Tim, how lovely! it sounds very inviting. I'll be there! Thank you for your blessed wishes, my friend.

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  7. This is such a tender piece of writing. Cold words with a warm message.

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  8. Thank you, Mike! Your tender words and visits, always brightens my days.

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  9. Sannel, you remind me what I miss in life. D

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