Sannel Larson

Tuesday, March 12, 2013

Wishes - Double Etheree Poem






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soft 
snow-like 
puffs of seed 
tremble in wind 
while children in glee 
leapfrogging and dancing 
amid lush emerald green grass 
small fingers grasp gently white puffs 
close their eyes tight and begin to blow 
they wish for all the children to have love 
they wish for all the children to have food 
resembling white and fair angel wings 
with ease they go off in the wind 
flying through the azure sky 
'tween airy pillow clouds 
wishes on journey 
arrive at last 
in the safe 
arms of 
God

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© Copyright 2013 by Sannel Larson. All rights reserved

16 comments:

  1. Simply beautiful, Sannel! I love the thought of those little seeds carrying such wishes. Let's hope they are answered around the world. Thanks for sharing this lovely etheree. Your talent grows, my friend!

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  2. Rick, yes, how I hope those wishes will be answered in one way or another. I'm glad you enjoyed my first etheree here. With some practice, hopefully, I'll get better at it.
    Thank you, my friend for your time and kind words.

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  3. Mitch, I take that as an approval, lol! Thanks!

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  4. A quick note of sharing. (Ooopps, not enough room for the comment giggle. So, thought not 'nice' seems strange it says much to those in the know.

    So, I though I would share this imagery and poetry conjures several childhood memories not known for 34 years. Thank you Sannel for that gift.

    Mitch Summers

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  5. This is beautiful, you are an artist.

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  6. Mitch, that's "nice" Thank you!

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  7. Mike, oh, you are too kind! Thank you for the beautiful compliment. Not sure if I really live up to it, but your kind words bring joy to my heart and to my day nonetheless!
    Hugs!

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  8. Sannel, you are a wonderful poet! Love your beautiful words and how you formed into the design! Amazing photograph compliments too!

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  9. Audra, I am truly honored by your compliments and cannot thank you enough for them. I will always cherish them.

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  10. Hi Sannel,

    I wish I could find the words to tell you how much I love this poem. I will say poetic perfection. You are a wonderful poet.

    Hugs
    Sue

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  11. Sue, I'm really sorry for this very late reply. I had one of those weeks. . .
    Oh, you are too kind, my friend. I could not have done it without the support and feedback from wonderful and loyal readers like you. Your praise and encouraging words inspires me to go on writing. Thank you for the kind words that I won’t forget anytime soon.
    Hugs!

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  12. I am so so late but better late than never I think. A wonderful creation Sannel;you are indeed one very talented lady.

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  13. Eddy, thank you for your constant support and beautiful words regarding my work. I'm blessed having wonderful friends like you to brighten my day. I'm so sorry for me late reply, but as you said; Better late than never! :-)

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Your lovely comments are my reward,
Thank you !